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📋 题目


🎯 题型分析

项目内容
题型Discuss Both Views(讨论类)
话题社会类 - 工作与职业
关键词job satisfaction, job security, permanent job, good salary
考察能力分析不同的职业价值观和人生选择

🔍 审题要点


📝 高分范文


📊 结构拆解

【开头段】
├── 背景:work occupies substantial portion of life
├── 强调重要性:not trivial but profound
├── 立场:satisfaction should be prioritised
└── 条件:provided basic needs are met

【主体段1 - 薪资安全派】
├── 引出:Those who prioritise...make rational argument
├── 尊重:cannot be dismissed
├── 论点1:meet needs, support family, save
├── 论点2:financial stress → anxiety, conflict
├── 论点3:uncertain times, tangible value
└── 让步:satisfaction cannot guarantee

【主体段2 - 满意度派】
├── 转折:However, advocates argue—compellingly
├── 论点1:40+ hours of unfulfilling work → burnout
├── 论点2:research shows intrinsic factors matter more
├── 具体因素:meaningful work, autonomy, mastery, purpose
└── 总结:no paycheck can replace

【主体段3 - 个人观点】
├── 理想:find both
├── 现实选择:satisfaction matters more after basics
├── 理论支撑:diminishing returns
├── 对比论证:psychological cost constant every day
└── 精彩对比:poorly paid job loves vs well-paid dreads

【结尾段】
├── 总结:hours should be fulfilling
├── 两个极端:neither wise
└── 结论:balance, but satisfaction priority

✨ 语言亮点

高分词汇

词汇/短语含义用法示例
a substantial portion相当大的一部分occupies a substantial portion
tangible value实际价值has tangible value
intrinsic factors内在因素intrinsic factors like autonomy
diminishing returns边际效用递减the principle of diminishing returns
burnout职业倦怠can lead to burnout
wasted potential浪费的潜力a sense of wasted potential
align with与...一致work that aligns with one's values
at the expense of以...为代价chasing money at the expense of meaning

高分句型


🔄 可迁移表达

这些表达可以用于其他选择类话题:

原句可迁移到
"occupies a substantial portion of our lives"教育、休闲、社交媒体使用等话题
"the principle of diminishing returns"任何边际效用讨论:金钱、消费、学习
"work that aligns with one's values"教育选择、职业规划话题
"neither extreme is wise"任何需要平衡立场的话题
"provided that basic needs are met"分层次讨论的话题

💭 思考延伸


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